I want to say it was interesting, and I liked the expanse of it. Having some sort of character list, maybe with one time illustrations would be great. I, for example, didn't know what an Nilgai was.
This was much longer than thought it would be. I would like the branching plot to be fleshed out more (obviously, that will come with time).
I will say that there are issues. Some of the... abbreviations(?)/alt text are messed up. Some of them "work" but don't seem to have the right text. Some of them have text, but are just in the normal body text instead of partially hidden.
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That background colour makes me want to do a little key
Unfortunately we're entering depression fall /s
I want to say it was interesting, and I liked the expanse of it. Having some sort of character list, maybe with one time illustrations would be great. I, for example, didn't know what an Nilgai was.
This was much longer than thought it would be. I would like the branching plot to be fleshed out more (obviously, that will come with time).
I will say that there are issues. Some of the... abbreviations(?)/alt text are messed up. Some of them "work" but don't seem to have the right text. Some of them have text, but are just in the normal body text instead of partially hidden.
Carp, I thought I caught all of those alt text moments. Do you know which passages still broke?
Also thanks for reading!